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i sat alone at night watching the moon thinking about my lovely Queen's face wondering how does her beautiness bloom the words got lost and there was no phrase

  1. #1 My Queen 
    queen

    i sat alone at night watching the moon
    thinking about my lovely Queen's face
    wondering how does her beautiness bloom
    the words got lost and there was no phrase

    to describe my Queen's beauty hazel eyes
    or her smooth blond golden hair
    when she looks at me, it makes my heart flies
    hoping to protect her from the cold air


    that's what i've been despretely hoping to do
    i wonder when can i put her head on my shoulder
    and feeling her smooth hair with my hand, will you?
    yes,you my Queen will you help those feelings holder


    wondering about those words i said and i know
    i'll say nothing when i see my lovely Queen
    but i can only enjoy her smile and don't excpect no
    cause there's no sweet girl as you that's what i've seen


    i wonder when she can understand what i feel
    her smile can effect people in a good way
    with lips and smile like that, she can really heal
    she can shine your soul during the shinest day

    the time floods fast when i remember her face
    and yet i feel like i'll never complete any phrase
    cause this is my lovely sweet Queen
    the beauty kindest girl i've ever seen

    My Queen







    التعديل الأخير تم بواسطة رمـــاد ; 10-Nov-2006 الساعة 08:04 PM
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  2. #2 Help!! 
    جلست نص ساعه عشان اضبط النص لليسار

    الله يرحم واللديكم لو تعلموني نبذه بسيطه عن هالايقونات و كيف نتعامل معها

    و الشعر اللي قلته تراه من مخيلتي لا به لا شقرا ولا عيون عسليه

    ايه على فكره لازم استعمل الانجليزي دابم ؟





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  3. #3 :) 
    i hope that you give me your honest feedback about this poem and have a nice day everyone





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    the time floods fast when i remember her face
    and yet i feel like i'll never complete any phrase
    cause this is my lovely sweet Queen
    the beauty kindest girl i've ever seen

    than k you for nice words about your queen

    you have a nice had really

    and you do it great my brother

    yours LP





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  5. #5 Smile  
    thanx for passing here brother linkin park.
    it means alot for mei was about to lose hopeactually i started to look for another fourmbut thanxnow i can post more





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    no do as me in the beging i lost hope

    but i told my self i don't care about that if no one inter my topics and live a comment but i like my topics even if there is no one like

    just trust your self you will be fine

    you will see that

    and your dream will come true beleive me

    i been like you before
    so here i am

    thank you

    yours LP





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    DeaDSouL
    thx alot for this poem
    Don't stop plzzz

    you are the BEST





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  8. #8 Smile thanx 
    thanx for passing here brother Druged.and don't worry i'm not going to stop thanx to linkin park.i will keep posting rather if i got review or notthat makes me like it's my personal website :D





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    yeah that's what im talking about

    keep on man

    don't forget hope ever

    thank you

    yours LP





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