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this is a poem i wrote in another website i hope you like it i wanna be a sea so i can be the only one who

  1. #1 a Poem 
    poem

    this is a poem i wrote in another website

    i hope you like it



    i wanna be a sea so i can be the only one
    who can see your beauty reflection on the silver sea
    i wanna be a cloud to protect your face from the hot sun
    to be with you everywhere you go you and me

    i wanna be a rain drop to touch your beautiful face
    i wanna be a breeze to hold your perfum smell everywhere
    i wanna be a star to be with you all night from the space
    to watch your beauty sleeping face and your smooth hair

    i wanna be an Echo sound,to tell every ear that i love you so much
    you're the girl i love and you're the one i would to die for
    i love you so much and nobody will know how much
    i love you my angel my princess the one whom i adore


    i wanna be a star yes!! a star shaining and very fari wanna be a star.1


    written by.Dead||Soul


    I really don't believe my self.why did i wrote this

    was i living a dream??0

    oh well, the life moved far away from what i want

    Best Regards

    Good Day and Good Luck

    a Poem







    التعديل الأخير تم بواسطة رمـــاد ; 26-Oct-2006 الساعة 10:56 PM
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    [align=center]Hi Ramad

    I dont know what to say . but its really very very nice

    i'll be waiting for more poems from you

    Best wishes [/align]






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    Thanx for passing here and Reading my poem
    Miss.Ameera

    and i'm very Glad that you like my poem

    and i just post it hereto make the people post more

    those poems brings nothing but pain to me

    Best Regards

    Good Day and Good Luck


    Dead||Soul






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  4. #4 Thumbs up very good 
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    i wanna be a rain drop to touch your beautiful face
    i wanna be a breeze to hold your perfum smell everywhere
    i wanna be a star to be with you all night from the space
    to watch your beauty sleeping face and your smooth hair

    waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaw

    did you wrote that??? waaw

    it's so beautifol i like this part it's really good

    why you dont want to write agan ?

    Princess_Lilly






    التعديل الأخير تم بواسطة Princess_Lilly ; 27-Oct-2006 الساعة 03:48 AM
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    [align=center]Hi Ramad.

    very nice words and very Lovely thinking I like the part of the perfume and the breez. I guess you drove the girls in the forum crazy!!
    about your last reply, your question wasnt stupid. I graduated this year.
    by the way, with no reason why, I didnt expect that you write romantic poems. anyway, show us more.

    nice one!!![/align]





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    wlecome Princess Lilly

    i'm glad that you like this poem

    and why i don't write again it's for some reasons

    best Regards


    Dead||Soul






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    Welcome Ice Tea

    i'm glad that you liked my poem0

    but really why you didn't expect that i write romantic poems


    i thought it's clear from the picture in my signture

    the Echos of my sad voice are filling my dream land
    where're you i need you, i need to touch your hand
    i wish i can see your face, i'd be watching your smile forever
    my heart would die, Baby come let's be togther forever and ever

    a note for you Ice Tea

    if you need anything to say just say it in the chat topicbecause it's one of the fourm rule

    no talkjust reply for the topic

    anyways.go to the chat room i left somthing for youand for the rest of my friends

    Best Regards

    Good Day and Good Luck


    Dead||Soul






    التعديل الأخير تم بواسطة رمـــاد ; 28-Oct-2006 الساعة 01:20 AM
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    wow woieeee

    Are you sure that you wrote that sweet poem??

    i don't think so man,poetry is hard to write man

    but hell, i loved it

    thanx mr,DeadSoul

    loooooooooolz





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    wow Free Style

    the impoertant thing is that you liked the poemif you don't believe that i wrote it

    i can make you sure that i wrote itbut i'll tell you later how

    Best Regards


    Dead||Soul






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    [align=center]Hi again Ramad.

    about my expectation, I told you I didnt know why I didnt expect it. maybe cuz I didnt know any saudi men who write such soft words, maybe cuz your style in the forum is friendly, very natural and open. I expect you write sad poems. such as an arrogant man who left his lover with no mercy. plz dont laugh. AM honest and frank.

    to be honest, I dont understand the picture of your signature. I see only a figure but I cant figure out what else beside it. [/align]

    BY the way, I have a question: what do you mean by: if you need anything to say just say it in the chat topicbecause it's one of the fourm rule

    which Topic Room?

    thanks alot, regards





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